Write an EXPLODE THE MOMENT about today's recess.
Remember that an EXPLODE THE MOMENT is a moment by moment description of what happened!
Monday, November 1, 2010
Explode the moment
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Remember that an EXPLODE THE MOMENT is a moment by moment description of what happened!
Remember that an EXPLODE THE MOMENT is a moment by moment description of what happened!
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One day we went outside running 3 laps with my friend Branajor,Iyuanna,Nia,Laila. I said when we finish our laps do you want to play tag nahhhhh we always play tag. Then when we finished our laps all of a sudden we started to chase Branajor and then me and Iyuanna ran and we almost got her. We ran a little bit more and fianally caught her and she tried to get loose and turned around and bumped her lip. I had one of those bumps and it stayed on there about 1 and a half day .But anyways so we walked over to Mr.Barron and we said we like your shades. Mr.Barron ' my glasses turn into shades when I go outside'. He said I like your shades Kendra thanks Mr.B YOUR THE BEST then Branajor had a eat with a friend pass and she said she was going to invite me to her and Iyuanna and Nia table because they all sit at the same table.Then the recess whistle rung and it was time to line up for lunch.By Kendra
that is a pretty good story! it has about everything to get a good grade! i wish that you could make this a full story!
I walked outside joyfully like Ijust won 1 millon bucks.I ran to Emma Grace and sarah saying lets show Ms.Pickert are little thing that we do everyday at lunch .WAIT I bloomed where is Alexis we can't do it with out her.If she's not here it will not sound right we all called and said ALEXISSSSSSSSSSSS she did not here us paige had to go get her she came.Emma Grace said hope believe sarah said faith ava said crazy alexis said POWERRRRRRRR I said in a booming voice!By Kendra
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