Thursday, January 13, 2011

The Lamp - An Explode the Moment by Abin

The lapis lazuli lamp liked children especially little ones. The blue lamp stood in the right side of the room. There it could see every body. The lamp had a bright bulb and the stem was half red and orange. The top narrowed near the bulb. One day the lamp saw a kid that had just passed out of babyhood. The kid came closer and closer until he touched the lamp. Suddenly, the lamp tipped and fell over.”CRACKK!” the sound was horrible. The boy started crying. Some adults rushed to the kid, but nobody rushed to lamp. ”Everyone hates me now.” The lamp thought sadly. From that day on the lamp hated children no matter their size (adults too).               

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

when it comes to writting, your stories are very detailed!

darshana

Anonymous said...

best explode the moment i ever read

Anonymous said...

explode the moments by abin are very detailed



emma

Anonymous said...

I loved it I think that Abin used more detailed then lots of storys I had read in a long time

by.Alexis

Anonymous said...

wow that was a good explode the moment Abin i first thought ms.pickert rote it. it was good.
from:Angel

Anonymous said...

this has soo much detals i love it!!!!

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